These late-night writing sessions are definitely turning me into a zombie. I need to start getting to bed before midnight, not at 2 a.m.! Either that, or I need to take up drinking coffee. Unfortunately, coffee really isn't an option, so I guess I'm going to have to do the sleep thing. ;)
As I work on the final draft of a romantic Steampunk fantasy, I'm naturally still hard at work promoting
Dead Wrong. I love to write, and a writer's work is never done.
Meanwhile, I'm reading
Tempest's Legacy and
The Nine Orders. I *tried* to get into
Tales of Aradia: The Last Witch, and simply could not. It was just too adolescent for my tastes; definitely geared toward teenagers, rather like
666 Park Avenue. Though another problem with "Aradia" was that it really, desperately needs editing. I think it is probably one of those instances in which somebody wrote a story, and a few friends looked at it and said, "Great story! You should publish this!"
Friends don't let friends self-publish without proofreading first, however.
That is one of the biggest challenges as a writer - finding somebody to give your work (amateur or otherwise) helpful feedback and a critical eye.
I am very grateful to my friends who have done this for me. For every five who offer to read one of my stories to give such feedback, one generally comes back with a useful critique. (Two generally read it and say, "Great story!" and two ultimately are too busy to read it, even if they want to in the first place.)
I'm not sure what part of "constructive criticism and feedback" people do not understand. Heh. "Great story!" does not tell a writer anything. It does not tell us why you liked a story, if there were any parts you did not like, and if there were any parts that left you confused, annoyed, bothered, upset, angry, happy, pleasantly surprised, etc.
This is why when two indie authors were looking for feedback, I was more than happy to give it. Unfortunately, one's book was quite overpriced, and while I did not mind reviewing the excerpt, I did not want to purchase the book. I think it is probably a very good book, but the self-publishing company she used set far too high a price on a paperback, in my opinion. Had it been an ebook, I probably would have downloaded it.
A serious writer does want to know, not just the positives in their story, but also the flaws. As much as people have been enjoying
Dead Wrong, the one flaw that has been a common theme among readers is that they want it to be longer.
It was intended to be a fairly stylized short, dark story of betrayal and revenge. The romance and erotica are only meant to be barely there, and just serve to set events into motion.
But if that is what people want, then I am listening. Writing sometimes needs to be about fanservice; about giving people what they want. We all have a vision that we are trying to get out there - that we hope will entertain people. So that is why a sequel to
Dead Wrong is in the works (hold onto your hats - it's going to be a very long, bumpy ride there).
After I finish this final draft of my Steampunk fantasy, of course, and get it off into a publisher's hands! ^.^
Copyright (c) 2011 Wendy L. Callahan